I had a hard time trying to figure out what transitions and fonts were compatible with the authorstream website. However, this is my illuminated text. Enjoy!
Your Illuminated text made me think about....how much I cherish the love I have with my husband. You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... make some of the slides slower- I really had to read quickly on a few of them What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....The photos were great!
Your Illuminated text made me think about death (literally and figuratively).
You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... I would change the music to something a little more melancholy to represent the sadness and loss of you poem.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how each slide's image reflected the message of each line (the tear running down a face, ring on finger, etc.) Nice Job! :)
Your Illuminated text made me think about.... how sad that was. You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... Slide five was too fast - I couldn't read it all What I like best about your Illuminated Text is.... How you used images to tell the story. Nice Job!
Your Illuminated text made me think about how quickly we can lose someone. (Disclaimer - I watched your new one and I loved the changes) If I were just watching this one and had to come up with suggestion, I would say great pictures, black and white may have made the message even more powerful if you could edit them. What I like best about your Illuminated Text is a lot of things and I'll comment on the new one later. But, I liked how you incorporated credits so the music didn't stop short after the last slide of text. I just loved it all, though.
How sad! Good use of images to illuminate the meaning of the text!
ReplyDeleteThe music might be a little too cheerful. But then again it does help to catch the reader off guard at the end. :0
A few slides moved to quickly for the reader to read all the words. Add a couple more slides or slow down the transitions.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....how much I cherish the love I have with my husband.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... make some of the slides slower- I really had to read quickly on a few of them
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....The photos were great!
Your Illuminated text made me think about death (literally and figuratively).
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... I would change the music to something a little more melancholy to represent the sadness and loss of you poem.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how each slide's image reflected the message of each line (the tear running down a face, ring on finger, etc.) Nice Job! :)
Your Illuminated text made me think about.... how sad that was.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... Slide five was too fast - I couldn't read it all
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is.... How you used images to tell the story. Nice Job!
Your text reminded me of when my ex girlfriend and I broke up...so sad...
ReplyDeleteSome slides need to be slowed down.
I like the image use.!
Your Illuminated text made me think about how quickly we can lose someone.
ReplyDelete(Disclaimer - I watched your new one and I loved the changes) If I were just watching this one and had to come up with suggestion, I would say great pictures, black and white may have made the message even more powerful if you could edit them.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is a lot of things and I'll comment on the new one later. But, I liked how you incorporated credits so the music didn't stop short after the last slide of text. I just loved it all, though.