Monday, June 10, 2013

Week Four: Illuminated Text (Final Draft)


2 comments:

  1. Your Illuminated text made me think about....
    how much i wanted to cry!!! i like the quote!

    You should consider changing/adding/taking out....
    it was a little fast paced - maybe slow it down a little

    What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....
    you used a picture from my favorite show Pretty Little Liars!

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  2. Your illuminated text made me think about how fleeting life is.

    I would work on the text for "the class ring"- it looks pixelated and at the end with the dark patched in the snow, the text was difficult to read.

    This was very easy to follow, your presentation has nice flow, nothing seems out of place.

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